in recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular in china. people not only cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the "most beautiful teacher" and the "cutest baby".
li jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the "best police officer" competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers' daily work. li jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. he is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. he is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.
su hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the "future singer" competition. he has already received three similar invitations this week. his uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. su hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. to vote, or not to vote? this is a question that troubles him very much.
on-line voting has become increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in it. it is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.
in my opinion, on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participate in public life. it makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go around seeking support. in addition, the internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. furthermore, voting on the internet makes instant feedback possible.
to be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they are divided between emotion and fairness. things will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey. therefore, i hold a positive attitude towards on-line voting.
internet voting is quite popular nowadays. many people are somewhat puzzled at the negative side of the voting, although some are quite happy with it, and are actively involved in it.
in my opinion, internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society. firstly, people may feel forced when asked to do things that they don't want to. secondly, voting of this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors, but rather on how many social-networking resources they have. thirdly, the voters or even the competitors in many cases can be taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.
in short, internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted. therefore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed. everyone in our society should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.
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